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Another fabulous Dad poem, Mike. Your pamphlet with Glass Head is one of my favourites. I think many of the Read To Write men have written a Dad poem after they're gone. I know I have, as have Ian, Mick J and Paul I and I've identified a bit with all of them.. In fact, another one is brewing right now as a result of things happening recently! I've also done granddad poems to notch it back one generation.

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Thanks Tim. we were talking tonight at R2W Mexborough about the themes that bubble up in one's poetry. I never intended to write so many Dad poems, but then I'll write something and afterwards realise - oops - there's another one! looking forward to hearing your new one.

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Dad poems vs Mam poems? I have tried a Mam poem, bot didn’t turn out too well. Hard to not sound either dispassionate or too saccharine. Might have another go.

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Great poem Mike, I love the affection in this and the sci-fi supernatural link. You might like Suzannah Evans Space Baby for that reason, she manages to find humour in the end of the world, which I suspect you would too. Your poem inspired me to write The Ghost of Bob Marley. It might be worth sharing one I did on my dad, who's basically my hero. Forget John Wayne and Clint Eastwood, he built the Alamo in our back garden while holding down a busy day job.

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Dec 4, 2023·edited Dec 4, 2023Author

Thanks John - I'll take a look at that Suzannah Evans one.

We need to get your substack up and running too.

Perhaps we could meet up sometime (probably after Christmas now) - and indulge in some computer nerdery.

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